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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

mohammad amin's submission: Average Rating:
My favorite sandwich that I can cook it well is Royal Burger. the ingredients of this sandwich consist of:good hamburger that I make it before,some slides of salami,some slides of pizza cheese , chopped mushrooms and a little spicy sauce , i prefer to eat it with a coke ,
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  • Helen
    Mochapoints: 2714  |  Teacher Score: 762 (100%)
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    Mochapoints: 2714  |  Teacher Score: 762 (100%)
    Excellent! It must be delicious. The only mistake is punctuation.
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  • Johanne
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    My favorite sandwich, that/which I can cook it well (myself), is the Royal Burger. The ingredients of this sandwich consist of good hamburger (meat), that I make it beforehand [first], some slices of salami, plus some slices of pizza cheese, chopped mushrooms and a little spicy sauce. I prefer to eat it with a coke.

    Very good indeed!
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