Giving and Receiving
Instructions:
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2
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I am very luck this month, since I have got two gifts from my internet friends. Two weeks ago, one friend of mine from America gave me a big surprise, he sent me a package by the post office. When I suddenly received and opened it , I saw there were some interesting books inside, and some sweets and toys for my son.
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mutu38Mochapoints: 3020 | Teacher Score: 520 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
mutu38Mochapoints: 3020 | Teacher Score: 520 (0%)
hello.. 1-I am very lucky this month 2-I saw there were some interesting books inside, some sweets and toys for my son Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
mutu38Mochapoints: 3020 | Teacher Score: 520 (0%)
I think this is true but may be wrong Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
PeterMochapoints: 6854 | Teacher Score: 5235 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
PeterMochapoints: 6854 | Teacher Score: 5235 (100%)
非常好！！ "lucky" as mutu said "...a package by mail" or "mailed me a package" Very very good! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Alanlancs1Mochapoints: 13950 | Teacher Score: 8601 (96%)hen hao "lucky" "because I got two gifts..." Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
SiGeMochapoints: 6003 | Teacher Score: 4630 (100%)I am very luck this month 应该把 luck 换成 lucky，luck是句词，而lucky是形容词。 he sent me a package by the post office. 首先，那个 the 用得又是不对的，因为不是特指，不需要 the。其次，这句话你可能改为 he sent me a package by mail. 或 he mailed me a package. , since I have got two gifts from my internet friends. since一般不作为强调原因的“因为”来用的，它有“既然”的意味。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
SiGeMochapoints: 6003 | Teacher Score: 4630 (100%)
对不起，打错了一个写，应该是luck是名词，不是句词。 上面的朋友指出你的 and 的用法也有一点问题。and 是用来连接两平等并列关系的两个句子中的成份。如果有两个以上的，那就要用逗号隔开，只是在最后的那个前面加 and。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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