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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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Today is Auguest sixth. I'm taking my holiday Beijing.I'll go to see hoisting the national flag on Tian An Men Square at six o'clock tomorrow morning.Seventh,i will go on a visit to the Palace Museum.I am going to go home September first.
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    Today is August (6th) sixth. I'm taking my vacation in Beijing. At 6am tomorrow I will attend the hoisting of the national flag in Tian An Men Square. On August seventh, I Plan to visit the Palace Museum. I will be on vacation until September 1st. Keep up the good work, Your english is good you just need to concentrate on grammar.
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