Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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I went to shop on last Sunday.
The store is a supermarket near my apartment.
I bought some groceries, Spinach, eggs, Mai mushrooms, and natto.
The total was 582 yen.
I paid 600 yen, and the change was 27 yen.
The store is a supermarket near my apartment.
I bought some groceries, Spinach, eggs, Mai mushrooms, and natto.
The total was 582 yen.
I paid 600 yen, and the change was 27 yen.
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yeobiMochapoints: 289 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
yeobiMochapoints: 289 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)
I think 'The store is a supermarket near my apartment' is need to be fixed like 'The store was~' Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
yeobiMochapoints: 289 | Teacher Score: 55 (0%)
What is natto? Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
亜紀Mochapoints: 2507 | Teacher Score: 685Thank you, Whoamin! 'The store was~'...φ(._. ) The 'natto' is a Japanese traditional food. It's the fermented food made from soy. The natto is very healthy. I often eat natto in the morning. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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