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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is weather is very hot. We are in ten of august. Not is raining and tomorrow not be much diferent.
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  • Eduardo Alvarez
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    Luiz my recommendation: Today's weather is very hot. It's ten of august. It's not raining and tomorrow will not be much different
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  • Leyla
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    Today's weather was hot, Today's date is the 10th of August 2008, it is hot, and rainy, I think tomorrow is going to be warm again.
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    I agree again with the others. Today'S weather is very hot: the 's here represents possession (como DE en portugues) and it is not the same as 's which represent the verb to be (is). It is not raining and tomorrow will not be much different. future tense is needed when you talk about tomorrow. good job
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