Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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this holiday ,i came shenyang ,i became an English teacher and i knew lots of new things ,so i feel my holiday is very meaning .But i have something unhappy about a future ,today i talk with Aunt Huo to understand a more important thing that make me see a hope
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KeithMochapoints: 2524 | Teacher Score: 2002 (0%)Your meaning does come through, but the response could be improved a lot. Here is an example of how you might write the same thing: "During this holiday, I went to Shenyang where I became an English teacher. I learned lots of new things, so I feel like my holiday was very meaningful. I did discover a problem that I may have to face in the future, but my Aunt Huo helped me realize something important that gives me hope." I hope this is helpful. There are many ways to make any statement, of course. The most important suggestion I have is that you make note of the key changes my example recommends in your grammar. Keep up the good work! Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
augusto 英国 ไทยMochapoints: 17041 | Teacher Score: 11019 (0%)I came to Shenyang my holiday's perios is resulting very meaningful Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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