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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Usually, I have a walk with my parents at the park after dinner.I like playing badminton and swimming. I also like reading books and newspaper.
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  • kelin
    Mochapoints: 64914  |  Teacher Score: 63056 (100%)
    Super good job! The only thing I see you need to correct is the space after the period when you began the second sentence.
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  • Jan
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    Good job! ................................................................................ I usually walk with my parents at the park after I had dinner. I like playing badminton and swimming. I also like reading books and newspaper. Jan
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  • David
    Mochapoints: 17602  |  Teacher Score: 13844 (98%)
    Good, a few comments, you usually walk IN the park because you are IN the park when you are walking, unless you walk around it. reading books and [a] or [the] newspaper you cannort say reading newspaper
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  • .............
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    In the park, I usually walk with my parents, and play badminton with my friends. When I get tired of being physically active, I just sit on the grasses and read some books and magazines. . oink oink!!
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  • Aby
    Mochapoints: 2531  |  Teacher Score: 1457 (0%)
    Hey Dora,im here late.I have been in Beijing and was far from a computer but now im glad for your having so many good friends here helping your English.Follow them.Keep it up. Aby
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  • Dora
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    Thanks a lot~~~ *-*
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  • nerminfgr
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    good work.
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  • lillian
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    Please correct the space after the period when you began the second sentence.
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