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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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The woman is leaving her home.The man is going to work .the boy is playing .I am checking the homework.you are disturbing me.the girl is wearing the makeup
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  • Miya
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    good work
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  • Arina
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    The girl is wearing makeup. You don't need to say "the makeup", because it's a set phrase. Other than that, very good! ;)
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  • zhraa
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    Very good the girl is wearing the makeup >>the girl is wearing .
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  • Luna Azul
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    The woman is leaving her home. The man is going to work. The boy is playing. I am checking MY (your, their, his) homework. You are disturbing me. The girl is wearing* makeup. When you say THE homework you are defining HOMEWORK and you need to say WHICH homework. For example. . . I am checking THE homework THAT I DID THIS MORNING. I am checking THE homework FOR MY ENGLISH CLASS. etc. or you can say. . .I am checking MY SISTER'S homework I am checking MY homework. etc. Hope you understand me! Have a great day!!
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