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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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I`m reading a newspaper .
I`m walking with my sister .
I`m buyiny some candy .
I`m playing football .
I`m runing with my brother .
I`m eating a pobcorn .






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  • Thamer
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    buyiny= buying runing= running pobcorn= popcorn excellent!
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  • augusto 英国 ไทย
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    buying popcorn حسنا
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  • Golden Sands
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    Good work! You need focus on your grammar.
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  • Sadiq
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    Quality & Grammar is alright. but you've some mistakes in spelling... try to fix it. bye :)
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  • Camille
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    I think this question is asking what you do at the park regularly. When you say "I'm doing something" it means you are doing the thing right now at this very moment. If you do generally do something, like what you usually do when you go to the park, you would say "I walk with my sister," or "I like taking walks with my sister," or "I sometimes play football." You need to use a different tense to describe habitual actions rather than current actions.
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