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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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He is a man .
He is not a woman . He is a man .
She is a woman . She is not a man .
She is a woman .
He is not rich , He is poor .
She is fat . She is not thine .



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  • Phil
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    Hello Wesal. Very good. One mistake... She is not thin.
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  • murphy77 - Übun...
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    Tip . Do you know about the contractions of the verbs? It's usually used in informal language . He's a man . He isn't a woman . She's a woman...... :)
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  • Sadiq
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    Great Wesal. Keep it up.
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  • Gaza Baby
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    Good
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  • Camille
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    This is very repetitive. Try describing what the people look like, or what they do. He is not rich, he is poor. (he is not capitalized if it is not at the beginning of a sentence. thine=thin
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  • bilou21
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    trés bien!

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  • Matt
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    thin...

     

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  • Jarid Arraes
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    Hi, dear.

    NOT THINE, YES THIN.

    Congratulations!

    Keep Learning.

    ;)

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  • ososnavy
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    Very good.

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  • aliq8
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    gooooooooooooood job

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