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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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At a café i like to order a pastry Always .
My favorite drink is Mango juice.
I`m sometimes order a Nskver.

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  • Falka
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  • Thamer
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    i= I (always capital) i like to order a pastry Always= I always like to order a pastry I`m sometimes order= Sometimes I order good job keep it up :)
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  • Sadiq
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    Dear Wesal. Try to use comma when you stop a while in writing. Otherwise,Thamer did a great job. Go ahead it's a grat submission. Regards: Sdq
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  • Gaza Baby
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    Good ...I always like to order a pastry. "I" is a word and must be a capital letter. I sometimes order
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  • Nebil
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    Hi Wasel, At the cafe I always like to order pastry. My favorite drink is mango juice. I sometimes order a ??? (nescafe)? Good try, keep on practicing.
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  • Camille
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    At the cafe I always like to order a pastry. OR I always like to order a pastry at the cafe. I sometimes order a Nskver.
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  • Wibowosantoso
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    I'd like to order pastry at the cafe.My favorite baverage is mango juice.I sometimes order a Nskver. I wanna know further abaut "Nskver"Do you mind?
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  • BEBO
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    u have a good language but wizout focus soory to be tough wiz u i try to say be focus when u do ur submission keep on practicing and so beauty name wesal
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  • star130
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    i should always be capital "I"

    I some times order a Nskver or some times I order...
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  • realfun
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    Good job but let me write it again for you. Whenever I go to a café, I always order Pastry and mango juice is my favorite juice. Sometimes, I order an nskver.

    Good luck
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  • aliq8
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    nice try
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  • abusami33
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    I agree with realfun.

    keep practicing.
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  • ABOSHAKER
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    good work , keep going
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