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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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These fish are swimming in a dirty lake.
My husband was noisy. I wanted to kill him. (But with kisses).
My skin is soft. Yours is roug. (jajaja)
The Geo´s heavy elephant is on my garden.
The bayubar´s and cicatrice´s wedding was noisy.
My pillow is rough. I should buy a new one, more expensive of better quality.
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  • Bayuvar
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    Good job! You misspelled the word 'rough' once, the next time ok. Also, the 'elephant is IN my garden'. I wonder why the wedding was noisy ;-) You could re-submit your exercise [like you can do with any] and you'll have a perfect score! :-))
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  • Fredrik Wanger
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    Hola, gatita muy gracioso!! "yours is "rough" En el ingles decimos "ha"ha"ha"! "Geo's heavy elephant is "in" my garden. "Bayubar and Cicatrice's ...more expensie and of better quality. Saludos, Federico
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  • soula
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    Hi Anna, only two little mistakes that have been already mentioned. Nothing else to add. Your job is very good, as always of course. Bye-bye.
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  • Cicatrice
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    "I wanted to kill him (but with kisses)." Cracked me up. =D Perhaps "I should buy a new one, more expensive but of better quality"?
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  • naseeb jan
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    well done ,I agree with Fredrik comment.
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  • geo
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    Muy bueno como siempre, Anna. Fredico ya ha dicho lo que yo puedo ofrecer. Nice job!
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  • mozmozmoz
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    nice
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