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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

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The name of the holiday is La Feria de las Flores. It is in Medellin, Colombia. it is in august for a week. here you can find a lot of events like cavalcade, flower parede, food, parties with different kind of music like salsa, merengue, tropical and you can beautiful girls, Medellin has the most beutiful girls in the world.
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  • tamo
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    ,,August" ,,parAde" ,, you can dance with beautiful girls" ,,beAutiful" Well done!!!
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  • GB Fred
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    The name of the holiday is La Feria de las Flores. It {is held ~ takes place} in Medellin, Colombia _ _ in _August for a week. _There you can find a lot of events _such _as a cavalcade _and _a flower _parade;_ food and parties with different kinds_ of music _such _as salsa, merengue, tropical and you can _{meet / ..} beautiful girls. Medellin has the most _beautiful girls in the world.

    A damson is a fruit _like a plum, but smaller.

    I pick fruit, _such as damsons and plums.

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