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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 1

Describe the location of your city and country

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.

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My name is Shelleytu, of course, shelley is not my Chinese name, but i think every english learner should get a english name. Then you know, i come from China,a country that has a long and colorful history and is developing very fast. I am learning english, not just because that we have english exams, actually i love learning foreign languages and i love english very much.I'm trying my best to make as many foreign friends as possible to improve my english.
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  • Don Moore
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    Shelley, this is very well done. You must capitalize the personal pronoun "I" and you should add a space after a comma and two after a period. See!! Very few changes. Oh and you should capitalize words such as English.
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  • kromm
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    Terrific exercise in English, just the minor changes by Don Moore. Very good expression in your story.
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    Learn from what Don Moore has highlighted. Well Done!!
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  • Parker
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    My name is Shelleytu. Of course, shelley is not my Chinese name, but I think every English learner should get a English name. *As* you know, I come from China; a country that has a long and colorful history and is developing very fast. I am learning English, not just because that we have English exams,*but* I actually love learning foreign languages and I love English very much. I'm trying my best to make as many foreign friends as possible to improve my English. Great work! Only punctiation...You write very interesting exercises.
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  • edward
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    I am from China and my English name is Shelleytu. I think that every Chinese student learning English should have an English name. I am learning English because I love studying foreign languages, and not just because of the pending English exams. I also hope to make many foreign friends and improve in that way. China is developing very fast, and has a long and colorful history and I am proud to be Chinese. Well this is just another way of saying same thing. You already have great reviews. Keep it up. you are doing so well with such a good presentation. jia you jia you
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