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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

gisele felix's submission: Average Rating:
she is a Secretarity.
He is a soccer play.
I m a Recepcionisty.
You is not a girl.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Kris
    Mochapoints: 961  |  Teacher Score: 457 (0%)
    Hi Gisele. The grammar is mostly correct, although the last phrase should be "You ARE a girl" instead of "You is a girl". Also take care about the spelling of the following nouns: - "Secretary" - "Soccer Player" - "Receptionist" Here's how I would write it: "She is a secretary. He is a soccer player. I am a receptionist. You are not a girl." Keep up the practice and you'll do very well!
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  • AG
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    rsrsrsrs bem mais ou menos
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