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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

kylie's submission: Average Rating:

park is a beautiful place to relax.sometimes people go to parks to breath the fresh air ,sometimes they go for open place to play some games with friends.i went to a park with friends last weekends.we talked ,even run after each other in the part.that was fun.we enjoyed a lot
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  • Suki
    Mochapoints: 5680  |  Teacher Score: 296 (0%)
    The park is a beautiful place to relax. Sometimes people go to parks to breath the fresh air, and sometimes they go for an open place to play some games with friends. I went to the park with friends last weekend. We talked (a little?), and chased each other. Chasing was fun. We enjoyed ourselves a lot.
    Submitted over a year ago
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