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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Park is a great place for me. I love its quiet and beautiful. I always do some readings and have a single walk there. It is always the time when I reflect myself and keep myself away from the world's noise. I don't usually do some sports in the park. But I will play badminton sometime, if there exists badminton venues there. Besides, I always meet all kind of lovers there. It makes me have a dream that I can have access to meet my girl there. But in fact, I think I have many routes.
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  • SeTh
    Mochapoints: 18672  |  Teacher Score: 10079 (99%)
    Very nice
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  • mbkent
    Mochapoints: 14975  |  Teacher Score: 11346 (0%)
    Velvet - very elaborate writing as you typically offer! My corrections are in ALL CAPITAL LETTERS. THE Park is a great place for me. I love its quietNESS and beautY. I always do some reading (IN THE PARK) and I MIGHT TAKE a walk there TOO. It is always the time when I reflect UPON myself and keep myself away from the world's noise. I don't usually do sports in the park. But I will play badminton sometime, if there exists A badminton venue. Besides, I always meet all kind of lovers there. It makes me dream that I can have access to meet my girl there. But in fact, I think I have many routes.
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