English Writing Exercise

Going on Vacation

Describe a vacation you are taking? When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

Author:
brightman
This year I spent my summer holiday at Greece, amaizing contry in south of Europe.
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Submitted: 2008-08-24 07:00:27




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  • 2008-08-22 15:15:17
    kdyer85
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    amaizing- amazing contry- country well done :)
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  • 2008-08-22 15:23:20
    tina
    I think so as kdyer85 . Go ahead!
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  • 2008-08-23 05:38:34
    jijee
    Hi brightman The answer from are topics. I going to Greece in my holiday with summer. Or I will spent my summer holiday at the Greece. It's amazing country in south of Europe. done well.
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  • 2008-08-23 06:32:31
    Lidiya
    jijee is right. You had to use Future tense. Good luck!
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  • 2008-08-23 11:15:10
    brightman
    thanks, my friend... I think that I can't use the future, 'cause I was in Greece yet...
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  • 2008-08-24 07:00:27
    shreya
    It should be in future tense.
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