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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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The last vacation I went to the Ruiz´s snowy volcano. That place is 310 kilometers to Medellin, my city. To get there the ticket costs 300 thousand pesos. But ,it was a birthday gift.
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  • Cicatrice
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    For my last vacation, I went to Ruiz's... from Medellin, my city. The ticket for getting there cost*... *it costs = present *it cost = past
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  • Bayuvar
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    I agree with Cicatrice and have nothing to add!
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  • soula
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    Hi Anna, "For my last vacation" or "On my last vacation" "from Medellin" I think that "costs" is correct too if you are referring to a general truth (If the price of ticket is always the same). Otherwise you can use the personal pronoun "me" (The ticket cost me 300...)
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  • Fredrik Wanger
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    Hola, gatita, bueno "My last vacation was to the Ruiz snowy volcano. It is ...from my city, Medellin. The ticket cost ...saludos, Federico
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  • geo
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    Nice job, Anna. The others have left good comments. Keep up the good work. Chao.
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