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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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today is cold the people need the hat
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  • Elizabeth
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    today is it's cold, the people need the a hat.

    Dude, you should have written the weather for 5 days, not only one, and what different people need for EACH of those different weathers..

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  • Elizabeth
    Mochapoints: 12318  |  Teacher Score: 2754 (100%)

    by the way..

    Today is it's cold, the people need the a hat

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  • Mari Braga
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    Today it's cold and the people need a hat.

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