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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

Cesar Mendes's submission: Average Rating:
Well, in my city has nothing to do but, in Brazil you can visit Rio de Janeiro! Nice beaches, good weather, kind people! In São Paulo you can visit museums, art galleries and go shoping! Oh nice restaurants either!
You can visit Bahia, where is Canival everyday, nice people, good weather and there are a lot of turist points to visit!

Well, if you gonna visit Brazil, call me and if you wanna, we can go together!!! See you!
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  • IanH
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    Hi Cesar Very good. I'll be very happy if I can reach this standard in Portuguese!! I've written what you did again to compare - there are a few mistakes in yours but it's basically very good - most changes I made are to do with making it read better. See what you think as you read it... Well, there isn't much to do in my city, but in Brazil, you can visit Rio de Janeiro! Rio has nice beaches, good weather and friendly people! In São Paulo you can visit museums and art galleries or go shopping! Oh, nice restaurants too! Bahia is another great place to visit, with a Canival every day, friendly people, good weather and other tourist attractions! So, if you're gonna visit Brazil, call me and maybe we can go together?!! See you! See you later bro, Ian
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  • VICTOR
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    very good job !!!
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  • zdenka
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    very good my friend :-) i agree with Ian´ś comments
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  • Davep
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    Very good, a couple of errors, see corrections already made.
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