Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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She needs to a raincoat and an umbrella because it is cold and raining.
He is wearing a hat and a scarf because it's snowing.
The weather is hot and sunny.The women are wearing sunglasses.
It's cold and snowing,i must wear a sweater.
It's raining now,the all students have umbrellas.
He is wearing a hat and a scarf because it's snowing.
The weather is hot and sunny.The women are wearing sunglasses.
It's cold and snowing,i must wear a sweater.
It's raining now,the all students have umbrellas.
Submitted over a year ago
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Amilie AimesMochapoints: 2801 | Teacher Score: 1811 (100%)She needs to WEAR a raincoat / She needs a raincoat. (choose one of them) there's another mistake in the last sentence: It's raining now, ALL THE students have umbrellas. Otherwise, it's good. :) Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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