Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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On Friday,29th Augest I will travel to Ciro . I will go there to enjoy my vacation.
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Rosana EliasMochapoints: 63868 | Teacher Score: 43669 (100%)On Friday, AUGUST 29th I will be on vacation and I'm going to travel to Ciro. Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
ＳＵＳＡＮMochapoints: 2082 | Teacher Score: 1435 (0%)not bad. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
nadaMochapoints: 6144 | Teacher Score: 4061 (100%)I agree with Roxy but only the word Cairo. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Adrian Velazque...Mochapoints: 2962 | Teacher Score: 238 (0%)Good job only change the order; in dates u need to write first the month and after the day. On Friday, August 29th I´ll travel to Ciro. I´ll go there to enjoy my vacation. ¡Enjoy your vacations! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Sam PetersMochapoints: 20713 | Teacher Score: 18711 (98%)Very good attempt. On Friday 29th August, I will be going to Cairo on holiday. I will be sightseeing and touring the city in general. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ismeMochapoints: 3563 | Teacher Score: 430 (0%)very good Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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