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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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Hi...I have no pets, but my friend and neighbourt Ricardo has a nice dog. It is a little, brown and smart black dog very nice.
I just finished my dinner, but just now two boyas are preparing their dinner: they are doing "arepas" with cheese for each one and a glass of milk. I ate some vegetable and meet soup, what is good for my cold. The boys will wash their plates later and all that they used and the kitchen will stay very clean like I left it
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  • salutlemonde
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    Hi... I have no pets, but my friend and neighbour Ricardo has a nice dog. It is a little, brown and smart black dog - very nice. I just finished my dinner, but just now two boys are preparing their dinner: each of them is having "arepas" with cheese and a glass of milk. I ate some vegetable and meat soup, something that is good for my cold. The boys will wash their plates later, along with everything they used and the kitchen will stay very clean, like I left it.
    Submitted over a year ago
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