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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 3

My occupation

Instructions: Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?

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The great popular event in my country is the carnival. it happens in the months february or march.it is depend on the Santa week.There are three kind of it. In Rio de Janeiro happens the parades of samba school with much beautiful women using a small biquini accompanied by musicians playing cuíca,tamborine,bumbo etc.In salvador are the electric trio .In Olinda, it happens around the street for all the city.The peoples come to Olinda wearing fantasy,masks.The frevo is the pace playing there.On the carnival the peoples drink and dance quite.it during about one week.
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  • Dave46
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    The most popular event in my country is the Carnival. It is held in the months of February or March. It depends on when the Easter week is. There are three kinds of Carnivals. In Rio de Janeiro there are parades of samba schools with many beautiful women wearing a small bikini, accompanied by musicians playing cuícas, tamborines, and bumbos. In Salvador they have the electric trio .In Olinda, it is all around the streets in the city.The people come to Olinda wearing fantasy masks. During the carnival the people drink and dance a lot. The party lasts about one week. Very Good !!
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  • Isabel Theresa
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    Hi my friend Ana Valéria! The great popular event in my country is the Carnival. It starts in February or March depending on the Santa week. There are three kinds of it. In Rio de Janeiro, this holiday is celebrated by parades of samba schools that appear with many beautiful women wearing small biquinis and dancing through the rhythm created by musicians who play cuíca, tamborine, bumbo etc. In Salvador, there are the electric trios. In Olinda, it is all around the streets of the city. The people come to Olinda wearing costumes and masks. The frevo is the main dance there.On the Carnival, people drink and dance a lot. It lasts about one week. Congratulations! Well-described! Excellent!
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