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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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In the morning it was cloudy but in the afternoon it became sunny and we went on swimming in the pool near my house. We walked about 10 minutes to get to our destination. It was a nice afternoon to go outside but afterwards it became cloudy again. And when I went to my part-time job it finally rained as expected. I was lucky to bring my umbrella with me. I haven't seen the weather forecast for tomorrow. I hope it will be sunny the whole day.
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  • Peace
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    Great job :) It seems you had much fun! Did you get a sunburn? I saw the weather forecast. It will be hot(23℃～29℃) and sunny(sometimes cloudy) all day tomorrow!
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  • Dreambox
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    Thanks for letting me know. You are my private weather forecast. （笑）
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  • augusto 英国 ไทย
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    During the morning/afternoon we went to swim I was lucky about having brought my umbrella along with me
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