English Writing Exercise

Describe an area in your city

Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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Melisa
I have the brown hair. My hair is short. My eyes are black.
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Submitted: 2009-07-26 16:07:57




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  • 2008-09-01 10:55:26
    Tadzio
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    I have short brown hair. Good.
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  • 2008-09-01 22:07:20
    Lionel
    "the" is used when you can replace it by "this" or "these", like specific object(s). Because it would be very strange to say "I have this brown hair", so delete "the". good ;)
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  • 2008-09-12 14:08:28
    loona
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    I have short brown hair. Quite good. Try to write more.
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  • 2008-11-27 09:11:49
    Peiman Beighbab...
    En inglés no se usa los articulos definitivos para hablar del cuerpo.I have short brown hair. Chevere. Keep it up ps.Creo que pudieres describirte más de lo que has escrito,¿si?
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  • 2008-11-27 20:54:51
    Melisa
    Claro, no problem . thanks.
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  • 2009-06-22 07:51:02
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  • 2009-07-12 17:06:31
    chillos222
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    I have brown hair ,,  ( not the brown hair )

    everything else is perfect ,

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  • 2009-07-26 16:07:57
    kecito

    I have brown hair (no article).

    "My hair is short" sounds a bit funny, because your hair is something you have control over. However, I guess it's OK.

     

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