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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 2

Grocery Shopping

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the groceries that you bought during your last grocery shopping trip. Did you go to one store to buy everything? What was your most expensive item? What was your least expensive item? Did you buy an item that you haven’t tried before? What is one dish that you will be making this week using these groceries?

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My county's name is Japan. North of Japan are Russia, Korea. West of Japan are Taiwan, China. South of Japan are Phillipnes, Papua New Guinea, Australlia. East of Japan is United States.
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  • Gamdan
    Mochapoints: 5180  |  Teacher Score: 3904 (100%)
    and Korea . and china and Austrelia whenever you count , you must do the same you did but the last one should be with and Good luck :)
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  • anna
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    Good (as usual)! I quite agree with Ghadman about 'ands'. - Australia - the United States We were taught to say 'To the north/south, etc., but I don't think it's important, really. I like this short variant as well.
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  • nao
    Mochapoints: 1122  |  Teacher Score: 490
    Thank you guys every time. I understand what you said. - North of Japan are Russia and Korea. is that correct isn't it? and Australia and the United States were my misspelling. sometime I mis-spelling Australia and library.
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  • anna
    Mochapoints: 9953  |  Teacher Score: 5565 (100%)
    Hello again! And you're always welcome! The following phrase made me smile: - North of Japan are Russia and Korea. is that correct isn't it? The first sentence is correct, the second isn't. You can say either 'Is that correct?' or 'That's correct, isn't that? sometime I mis-spelling Australia and library. 'Sometime' means 'at a time in the future or in the past, although you do not know exactly when', while 'sometimes' - on some occasions but not always. So, sometimes you misspell words. But this isn't a problem, really - it's always easy to figure out what you wanted to say.))
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  • nao
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    thank you anna. your advice is very helpful for me. :)
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  • leapyfrog
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    Dear Nao, Here it is: My country's name is Japan. North of Japan are Russia and Korea. West of Japan are Taiwan and China. South of Japan are the Phillipines, Papua New Guinea, and Australia. East of Japan is the United States.
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  • nao
    Mochapoints: 1122  |  Teacher Score: 490
    Dear Leapy, thanks for your help every time. I don't know which I should use "," or "and". Should I use "," at first and use "and" at second or later?
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  • chelez17
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    When you are enumerating only 2 items, it would be enough to use "and". (ex. I love A and B). But when there are three or more items, that is the time that you use the comma+and combination. (ex. I love A, B, and C). =)
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  • nao
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    thanks for your advice, takuyaki :)
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