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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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Two month ago in may tirteenth I took my vacation , I visited algiers ,I acceded olympic stadium and I ............
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  • Rejeane
    Mochapoints: 1463  |  Teacher Score: 220 (0%)
    What more it happened in its vacations?
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  • luisa fernanda
    Mochapoints: 3211  |  Teacher Score: 714
    well atmane. congratulations! you have a very good structure, although there are some grammatical mistakes as in tirteenth that is incorrect, the correct way is thirteenth. Besides, the verb tense you used is not correct, you had to talk about "a vacation you are taking" so the verb tense must to be present progressive or future with going to. well that's all. continue trying and don't give up. Luisa
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  • Jailma
    Mochapoints: 1546  |  Teacher Score: 148 (0%)
    Hello, exercise is incomplete. There were errors in grammar. Please re-year. Do not give up.
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