Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The old man is bald. The young man is not bald.
She has black, strong hair.
I have short, blonde hair.
The boy does not have green hair. He has brown hair.
The man has a white beard and a moustache.
The woman does not have a beard. She long short, black hair.
She has black, strong hair.
I have short, blonde hair.
The boy does not have green hair. He has brown hair.
The man has a white beard and a moustache.
The woman does not have a beard. She long short, black hair.
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yamahitoMochapoints: 1765 | Teacher Score: 148 (0%)Good job! Two corrections: She has black, strong hair. = She has black, long hair. (did you mean long instead of strong?) She long short, black hair. = She has long, black hair. -or- She has short black hair. Also, when describing hair, you should use the color last. Example: She has long black hair. I hope this helps. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
yamahitoMochapoints: 1765 | Teacher Score: 148 (0%)Submitted over a year ago
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LachtraenerMochapoints: 1645 | Teacher Score: 764 (0%)Thanks yamahito Yes your answer is very helpful :-) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
LuanascenteMochapoints: 3316 | Teacher Score: 1776 (0%)Very good. I agree with yamahito. Very good job. Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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