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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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I went fishing with friends on my last vacation. I was not a lucky fisherman. During the whole morning, I caught only two small fish. They were too small to eat so I let them go. We had the fresh fish soup at lunch. The fish was more delicious than we bought in supermarket.
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  • mohammad
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    ... for lunch. ...than the fish we bought ... Very good!
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  • Rocío
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    I agree with Mohammad :) well done!!
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  • olly
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    Excellent work. I love reading your submissions, they always makes me smile.
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  • djproctor
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    I went fishing with friends during my last vacation. I was not a lucky fisherman. After an entire morning, I caught only two small fish. They were too small to eat, so I let them go. We had fresh fish soup for lunch. The fish was more delicious than the fish that we bought in the supermarket.
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  • Myrna
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    Good job! :-)
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  • Here
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    Thank you for your comments :-)
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  • elizabeth
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    Very good ! Keep on !
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  • levithan
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    than the fish we bought ...

    写的很好!
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  • Ken Webb
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    I went fishing with friends on my last vacation. I was not a lucky fisherman. During the whole morning, I caught only two small fish. They were too small to eat, so I let them go. We had the fresh fish soup for at lunch. The fish was more delicious than is the fish from the supermarket.
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