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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Yesterday was raining. The people need a raincoat or an umbrella.
Today is hot. The people need drink very water.
Monday was cold. The people need a cout.
Tuesday was warm. The people need clothes lights.
Wednesday was cloudy. The people maybe need raincoat.
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  • RAINA
    Mochapoints: 13664  |  Teacher Score: 2529 (100%)
    I think you need to study grammar harder. I could understand what you mean to. But all sentences don't match to each other. I left some example for you. Please try more~!!! ---------------------------------- It was raining yesterday so people needed a raincoat or un umbrella. But it is hot today. Many men and women may drink a lot of water. On monday, on the other hand, it was cold. I brought my coat as others did. ~~~
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