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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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He has short hair. He does not long hair.
The women does not have curly straight hair.
They have straight short hair.
The man have a white moustache.
The old woman does not have blown long hair.
I have long blown hair.
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  • Frank Gould
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    He has short hair. He does not HAVE long hair. The women does not have curly straight hair. They have straight short hair. The man (have) HAS a white moustache. The old woman does not have (blown) BLOND long hair. I have long (blown) BLOND hair.
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  • Cnato
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    ... The woman DOES not have or The women DO not have. ... BROWN or BLOND hair?
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