Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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I am in Taiwan, today is September 12th on Friday, the weater is cloudy and rainy, the temperature is 28 degree for average at north,
the central average tem. is 29 degree, the south is 30 degree, the east is 29. the ultraviolet index is so hight, from 2 to 8. Accroding to the report tomorrow is bad day, because the typhoon SINLAKU is close in Taiwan, today the weather station is reporting the typhoon news, center location is 22.8N 124.5E, movement 10km/hr, minimun pressure is 925hPa, maximum wind speed 51m/s. So tomorrow will be is bad day.
the central average tem. is 29 degree, the south is 30 degree, the east is 29. the ultraviolet index is so hight, from 2 to 8. Accroding to the report tomorrow is bad day, because the typhoon SINLAKU is close in Taiwan, today the weather station is reporting the typhoon news, center location is 22.8N 124.5E, movement 10km/hr, minimun pressure is 925hPa, maximum wind speed 51m/s. So tomorrow will be is bad day.
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Donny Noe Rioja...Mochapoints: 23453 | Teacher Score: 13523 (0%)Correct the following words: wheather, tomorrow is a bad day, minimum, tomorrow will be a bad day. That's all!!! Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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