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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

Cesar Mendes's submission: Average Rating:
The date today is September 13.th of 2008. The weather today it's not hot nor cold, but it's a fresh day. Now it's exactly 7:43AM and the sky is cloudy, no sun for today and it seems me that it'll keep that way for the whole weekend. I got sad, 'cause I won't work this weekend, (finally, thanks GOD!) and my friends will throw a party today, a great barbecue in a house with a pretty good pool. Well, now I don't know when I'll get a new weekend for resting. I think that my boss thinks I'm a slave!


A question... May I say::: The sky is over clouded today????
Thanks a lot everybody! C-ya!
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  • Davep
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    Very good Cesar, a couple of changes. The date today is September 13th 2008. The weather today it's neither hot nor cold, but it's a fresh day. Now it's exactly 7:43AM and the sky is cloudy, no sun for today and it seems me that it'll stay that way for the whole weekend. I've got sad, 'cause I won't work this weekend, (finally, thank GOD!) and my friends will throw a party today, a great barbecue in a house with a pretty good pool. Well, now I don't know when I'll get another weekend for resting. I think that my boss thinks I'm a slave! A question... You can say The sky is clouded over today.
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  • zdenka
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    hi cesar...very good:-) i agree with davep
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  • VICTOR
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    VERY GOOD !!
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  • Fae
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    Ola Cesar. --- Today's date is September 13, 2008. The weather today is neither hot or cold, but it's a fresh day. It is now exactly 7:43AM and the sky is cloudy, no sun for today. It seems that it will stay that way the whole weekend, thank God! My friends will throw a party today, and have a great barbeque, in a house with a pretty good pool. I think that my boss thinks I'm a slave! A question ... May I ask? Is the sky too cloudy today? =)
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  • IanH
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    Nice work bro Sorry it took so long to review it... Here's how I would write it: - The date today is September 13th, 2008. The weather today IS NEITHER hot nor cold; it's a fresh day. Now it's exactly 7:43am and the sky is cloudy - no SUNSHINE IS FORECAST for today and it seems TO me that it'll STAY that way for the whole weekend. I'm REALLY SAD, 'cause I'M MOT WORKING this weekend, (finally, thank GOD!) and my friends will throw a party today; a great barbecue in a house with a pretty good pool. Well, now I don't know when I'll get ANOTHER WEEKEND OFF. I think that my boss thinks I'm a slave! A question... May I say::: The sky is over clouded today???? Thanks a lot everybody! C-ya! {You could say 'The sky is clouded over today.' OR 'The sky is very cloudy today.'}. Speak to you soon hopefully my Brazilian brother - long time no hear!! Tchau! Ian
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