Describing your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1
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At the cafe I like to order a hot chocolate or another drink with milk or soya and a cake. I like cakes with fruits. My favorite drink contains milk or soya. If I order a sandwich, it should be a vegetarien. And then I drink water or an orange juice to it.
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Hello Appletree,
Good job! Just a few minor mistakes and one misspelled word. I'll re-write this to make it a little more clear in meaning.
At the cafe, I usually order a hot chocolate, or a similar drink that contains milk or soy milk, and a cake. I like cakes that have fruit in them. My favorite kind of drink is one that has milk or soy milk in it. If I were to order a sandwich, it would be a vegetarian one. If I were to order a sandwich, it would be for a vegetarian, like myself. Then, I like to have a glass/bottle of water or a bottle/glass/carton of orange juice to go along with my sandwich/it.
Take care,
Crashish