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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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The last time I went on a vacation was in July. I went to the Northwest of Brazil with some friends. We travelled by plane, because Buenos Aires, the place where we actually live, is very far from Salvador, the city where we had to arrive. After arriving there, we decided to visit other states. That's the reason why we also travelled by bus and by ship.
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  • Kelver.
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    Currently instead of actually. Actually doesn't mean "actualmente" that's a false cognate in Spanish. Good job.
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  • missfer
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    thanks kelver! but what I meant in that sentence was "the place where we live in fact" ...nao atualmente... thanks igual! bjs!
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  • wyatt4500
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    Near perfect again, but this time I think you could actually improve this.  DURING OUR TRIP we traveled by plane, bus and ship.  We went by plane to Salvador because it's a long way from where we live, in Buenos Aires.  ONCE WE GOT there we decided to visit other places in other states, and to get there we traveled by ship and by bus.

    Excellent!
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  • missfer
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    thanks for helping me improve!

     

    =)
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