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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

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In our country, so many people drink orange juice. It contains Energe, Carbohydrate and Vitamin C. I often drink it. It is pretty good.Do you drink it?
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  • Myrna
    Mochapoints: 6720  |  Teacher Score: 4377
    Energy.. Nice try!
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • aurea
    Mochapoints: 83149  |  Teacher Score: 56382 (98%)
    It contains energy,carbohydrates and vitamin C.Ok good,thanks bye
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  • Ine
    Mochapoints: 7400  |  Teacher Score: 5189 (50%)
    One minor misstypo (I hope) ENERGY :-) Well done Bestry!!!
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  • breeze
    Mochapoints: 13031  |  Teacher Score: 7146 (100%)
    VERY GOOD
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