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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is Sep. 18, 2008.It`s thursday. In the morning the weather was bad, it was a heavy rain, about 30 minutes, the sun was shine.
The weather was very hot at noon. I couldn`t go out. I cooked lunch for myself. In the evening I turned my fan on. I suppose the weather will be fine tomorrow. But the weather will be hot.
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  • Brian
    Mochapoints: 2745  |  Teacher Score: 378 (0%)
    Very nice. The only problem is with the second sentence: "In the morning the weather was bad, it was a heavy rain, about 30 minutes, the sun was shine." This is actually several sentences run together. In the morning, the weather was bad. --- this should be one sentence, all by itself. There was a heavy rain for about 30 minutes. OR There was a heavy rain, which lasted about 30 minutes. The sun was shining. OR Afterward, the sun was shining.
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  • Martha Andrew
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    Good good....very very good......just a bit mistake..thats all..................
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  • Professor
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    Nice job, Bestry! I agree with Brian's comments. Keep studying!
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  • breeze
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    VERY GOOD A FEW MISTAKES. SAY THERE WAS A HEAVY RAIN OR IT RAINED HEAVILY, THE SUN WAS SHINNING. CHANGE THIS SENTENCE LIKE THIS: BUT IT WILL BE HOT
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