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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 4

Describe your best friend

Instructions: Describe your best friend using the vocabulary words from this lesson. What does he or she look like? Does he or she have a unique feature? Do you and your friend have similar features? Ex: My friend has blue eyes and broad shoulders. I do not have blue eyes; I have green eyes.

alvaro's submission: Average Rating:
Hi
Hope you are doing good;

A favorite food exclusive from Costa Rica (at least that´s what i guess = P) is one called, rice & beans; the recipe is something as.... i´ll try 2 list it in some steps:
→ First, you ought to fry the rice in the pot
→ Next, When the beans are ready to eat stir them up
→ After that fry some bananas and get some ketchup, and salad
→ Finally, sit and enjoy your meal " bonapetite"

May grace be with you
http://www.srac.de/
alvaro
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  • fballknonothing
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  • fballknonothing
    Mochapoints: 2136  |  Teacher Score: 209
    Comprehensible, but a few points on the sentence structures: "ONE OF MY favorite foodS exclusive TO Costa Rica IS rice and beans. The recipe GOES/IS something like THIS: -First, fry the rice in a pot. -Next, stir the beans when they are ready. -After that, fry some bananas and get some ketchup and salad -Finally, sit and enjoy your meal. "Bon apetit!" sounds interesting!
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  • alvaro
    Mochapoints: 8242  |  Teacher Score: 7102 (0%)
    Danke Fballknonothing Many thanks ( :
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  • Margo
    Mochapoints: 729  |  Teacher Score: 459 (0%)
    Hi..You have done well...one mistake... when using the leter i on it's own....u need to use a capital letter I...ok Margo
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  • alvaro
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    ok thx
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  • babyrosy
    Mochapoints: 2226  |  Teacher Score: 1345 (0%)
    Very interesting^^I hope I can try to do. Sit down and enjoy you meal
    Submitted over a year ago
  • Beta
    Mochapoints: 7457  |  Teacher Score: 3162
    Hey Alvaro, does it really taste good? ;-)
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  • alvaro
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    yup it does !
    Submitted over a year ago

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