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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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I live in a beautilful city which is Xiamen in China.everyone would feel comfortable at winter,the weather is not hot or cold,just like Spring!
if you would come here,the Gulangyu island is worth to playing and walking.there are no cars on the island.the air is health,the trees are green,.on the other hand,the buildings is diferent from others in China,becaues this island was a colony a lot of years ago.also there are so many refectiones in Xiamen City.
Welcome to our city, i think you will have a good time and larruping experience!
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    I live in a beautiful city which is Xiamen in China. Everyone would feel comfortable in the winter.  The weather is not hot or cold, just like spring! If you would come here, Gulangyu Island is worth visiting to play and walk. There are no cars on the island. The air is healthy and the trees are green. On the other hand, the buildings are different from others in China because this island was a colony many a lot of years ago. Also there are so many reflections(?) in Xiamen City. Welcome to our city! I think you will have a good time and larruping(?) experience!

    For seasons, we say "in the summer" or "in the winter".  Health is noun and healthy is adjective. 'To play' is an infinitive.  To with a verb always takes simple present tense, never -ing.

    Good writing!  Keep practicing. I understand everything except for two words.

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