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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is Wenesday, 24 th of September, 2008. The weather of today is hot, but since we are in the tropic, to the late afternoon it is sure thats rains. For tomorrow I hope that the weather will be as that of today
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  • Ryan Fountain
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    Today is Wednesday the 24th of September, 2008. The weather today is hot. Since we are in the tropics, in the late afternoon, it will likely rain. I hope that tomorrow the weather will be like it is today.
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  • PETER COLLEY
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    Today is wednesday the 24 th of september.The weather today is hot,but since we are in the tropics,it is sure to rain ,in the late afternoon.For tomorrow i hope the weather will be the same as today.very good Pilar.
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  • Esdaile
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    Excellent, Pilar!!! I am sure that all the comments you have received will help you considerably.
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  • gabrielle
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    Good job! Pilar, I guite agree with Esdaile, !Gabrielle
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