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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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The flowers are scatter in the box. The box is on the table. There are some boxes on the table. The wallet is on the bed. The money is in the wallet. The coffee is on the table.
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  • Kr!$t@
    Mochapoints: 1733  |  Teacher Score: 161 (0%)
    next time say "the flowers are in the box." instead of scatter. and if you wanted to say scatter, then say "scattered."
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  • ~CindyMama~
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    The flowers are scattered in the box.

     

    That is the only change I see. Excellent, Sudhir!! :D :)
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