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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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My siater is a boylish girl.Her hair is short and straight just like a boy's.She doesn't like those bright colors such as red,yellow,pinkand green,but like white,black and grey best.Never caring for shirts,stockingsand stylish shoes.she always shouting and cheering excitedlywhen she is watching a football match.When she is with her friends,she often says"ladies first"to other girls.she always says that she should have been a boy.
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  • Stang
    Mochapoints: 723  |  Teacher Score: 492 (0%)
    Good. 1) sister 2) pink and green 3) but likes white 4) never caring for skirts, stockings and.... 5) she is(she's) always shouting...football game.
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  • dreamyzhou
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    I think your sister is nothing like you.
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  • zhengjiaoguo135
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    siater?
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  • Crazyanton
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    Nice work, most of it is good although it has nothing to do with the exercise.
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