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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

Oksana's submission: Average Rating:
1). The baby is quiet, she is sleeping in the room. 2).This man has a dirty shoes, he is on the rough and dirty road. 3). This cat is fat, it is always eating. 4). The big, old dog is sitting in the kitchen. 4). Feathers are on the pillow in bedroom. 5). He is ill, he always eats cheap food. 6). She is not strong, she can not carry this box.
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  • LadyRose
    Mochapoints: 23348  |  Teacher Score: 15339 (100%)
    Good, I can find only a few things: 2. This man has dirty shoes (or "a pair of dirty shoes") 4. ... in the bedroom. I would spell "can not" as "cannot", but I think this is British usage. "can not" is okay. Very well done!!
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  • Bill learning I...
    Mochapoints: 6508  |  Teacher Score: 4193 (0%)
    LadyRose is right - "cannot" is English English.
    Submitted over a year ago
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