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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.
The woman have twenty-five year old.
The boy has eight colored pencil.
In the park has three yellow cars.
In the school missing the class twelve students.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • rachelann
    Mochapoints: 10563  |  Teacher Score: 5551 (100%)
    you did great! correction: pencils not pencil In the park THERE ARE three yello cars. In the school there are twelve children missing. keep practicing you're improving!
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  • kaili
    Mochapoints: 6231  |  Teacher Score: 2406
    I would like to give you some advices: 1-The woman IS twenty-five yearS old.( In English, we use BE to demonstrate the years of age, it is different from Portuguese); 2-The boy has eight colored pencilS. 3-In the park, THERE ARE three yellow cars. 4-In the school, twelve students missED the class .
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  • Parisa
    Mochapoints: 10850  |  Teacher Score: 6214 (100%)
    The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles. The woman has a twenty-five year old. The boy has eight colored pencils. In the park are three yellow cars. Inside the school in the , twelve students are missing from class..
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  • Chantal
    Mochapoints: 20836  |  Teacher Score: 15196 (100%)
    yearS old, pencilS In the park, there are .... In the school, there are twelve students missing Keep going Calebe!!
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