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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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The last vacation that i took. I went to Cuautla. There i visited the Center Vacation Oaxtepec, It had a aquatic park, a cable car, cabins, swimming pool, a disco, tenis and soccer field, gotcha field, hotels and only remember these in this place.
There i bought the best beer that i have tested. `: )

Also i went to "El rollo" aquatic park. In this place there are many toboggan. My favorite toboggans were the racer, the stuka and the pendulo. In the stuka the people fell to 100 k/h. The pendulo the people fell on a launch and we did not see the floor, and for the racer i have not words.

In Cuautla there is a center of skydiving but I did not jump. : (

I fascinate tha hard emotions.


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  • riley20
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    Hola Ivan! ''The last vacation that I took. I went to Cuautla. There I visited the Oaxtepec Vacation Center. It has a wtaer park, a cable car, cabins, swimming pool, a disco, a tennis and soccer field, a gotcha field, hotels and that's all remember. I bought the beer that I have tatsed there. I also went to ''El rollo'' aquatic park. There are many toboggans here. My favorite toboggans are the racer, the stuka, and the pendulo. The stuka fell 100k/h. The pendulo fell on a launch and we didn't see the floor, and I have no words for the racer. In Cuautla there is a skydiving center but I didn't jump''. Keep up the good work Ivan!
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  • conejita
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    On my last vacation that I took I went to Cuautla.While being there I visited the Center ... It had an aquatic park....There I bought the best beer I have ever tasted. I also went to... The stuka fell....The pendulo fell on a launch and we ...As for the racer I have no words. In Cautla there is a center for skydiving..I was fascinated and..I am not sure what you were trying to say.. Well done,
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  • xxMandyxx
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    fab ivan, a few mistakes but good going!xx
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