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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 3

Staying at a Hotel

Instructions: Use the vocabulary from this lesson to describe a time you stayed in a hotel. Were you on a business trip or vacation? Did you order room service? Did you use their computers? Did you have breakfast in bed? Etc.

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If I stay in hotel on vacation I prefer spend all my time go out and back to hotel just to take a rest and sleep. I like order service, eating in bed, take a bath and use a coumputer.
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  • Taurus
    Mochapoints: 4124  |  Teacher Score: 2181 (0%)
    If I stay in a hotel on vacation,I prefer to spend all my time in the hotel just to rest and sleep. I like to order room service,eating in bed.I will have a bath and use the computer.
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  • Dana
    Mochapoints: 20330  |  Teacher Score: 8102 (98%)
    When I stay in a hotel on vacation, I prefer to spend all my time to go out. I'm back to the hotel just to take a rest and sleep. I like to order the room service, eat in the bed, take a bath and use the coumputer.
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  • Pocahontas
    Mochapoints: 4064  |  Teacher Score: 1057 (100%)
    Nice expression! and almost great...:) like your Style...:)
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  • Ton.y
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    If I stay in A hotel on vacation I prefer TO spend all my time GOING out and RETURNING TO THE hotel just to take a rest and sleep. I like TO order ROOM service, EAT in bed, take a bath and use a coumputer. WELL DONE - JUST SMALL MISTAKES
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  • Dave
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    "If I stay in a hotel on vacation, I prefer to spend all my time going out, and I use the hotel just to rest and sleep. I like to order room service, eat in bed, take a bath and use a computer."
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  • Bill learning I...
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    If I stay in a hotel on vacation I prefer to spend all my time going out and only going back to the hotel to rest and sleep.
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  • Karine
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    Very good. I agree wit Dave and tony for corrections. may be you can help me when I start writting mine in Russian
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