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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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My city is boring but surroundings there are activity for tourist for example : is near Jacomulco there there is ecotourism. The activitys in Jacomulco are river of adventure, raftin, gotcha, rappel, bike mountain, tyrolese, camping. In my state there are much ecoturism because there are rives a lot, beach and two mountains.

The principal activities recommend in my country are go to the beach, visit pyramids, visit places historics and the ecoturism.

I could extend me in each activity but is overmuch.
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  • susan
    Mochapoints: 1145  |  Teacher Score: 712 (0%)
    This is a challenging exercise. I see three major mistakes: 1. verb conjugations; 2. omitting the subject of the sentence; 3. vocabulary. Do you use the website www.spanishdict.com? I find it very helpful. My city, JACOMULCO, MEXICO, is boring, but [] MANY ECOTOURISM activitIES EXIST THROUGHOUT THE STATE OF XALAPA. For example, OPPORTUNITIES ABOUND FOR WHITE WATER RIVER RUNNING (?),[] raftinG, gotcha (?), rappelLING, [] mountain BIKING, tyrolese (?), AND camping. THE STATE BOASTS ecoturism because [] IT CONTAINS MANY RIVERS[], A COASTLINE, and two mountain RANGEs. The principal activities THAT I recommend TO TOURISTS VISITING MEXICO [] are TO go to the beachES, TO visit pyramids (PYRAMIDS IN MEXICO?), TO visit SITES OF HISTORIC SIGNIFICANCE, and TO ENGAGE IN ecoturism. I could EXPAND UPON [] each activity, but IT is TOO DIFFICULT TO DO SO IN ENGLISH (?).
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  • ivàn
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    En español lo que trato de decir es : Mi ciudad es aburrida pero en los alrededores hay actividad para turistas, por ejemplo: Las acitividades en Jacolulco son: rio de aventura, rafting, gotcha, rappel, ciclismo de montaña, tirolesa, area de acampar. En mi estado hay mucho ecoturismo, porque hay muchos rios, playas y 2 montañas. Las principales actividades recomendadas en mi país son: ir a la playa, visitar piramides, visitar lugares historicos y el ecoturismo. Podría extenderme mas en cada actividad pero es demasiado. piramides o templos pero decir templos se generalizan mas costrucciones. Jacomulco no es mi ciudad este lugar es un lugar que hay por mi ciudad. Me confundio mucho el comentario de Susan ¿Aguien podria comentarlo de otra manera?
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  • ryota
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    My city is boring but close to my city there are some place which tourists can enjoy many activities.For example, in Jacolulco which is close to my city, there are some activities for turists like raftting, trecking,camping and so on. In my state there are a lot of ecotourism because there are many rivers, beaches and 2 mountains. Reccomendation activity for tourists in my country is "Go to the beach", " Visit pyramids", "Visit historic places" and " Eotourism". I could tell more activities which tourists can do in Mexico if I want but it s gonna be too much to tell. Intente traducir tus oraciones. Aluguna parabra para explicar actividad no pude entender entonces yo omite lo siento. Buen trabajo!! Ojala que este ayude a ti. I tried my best to translate but I m not native so should be something s wrong. Also I couldnt understand some words so I omitted. Good Job!! Hope it will help you!! Ryota(^^)
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  • Parker
    Mochapoints: 2445  |  Teacher Score: 1988 (0%)
    My city is boring but *in the* surroundings there are activities* for tourists* for example : The activities* in Jacomulco are river of adventure, rafting*, gotcha, rappel, *moutain biking*, tyrolese, *and* camping. In my state,* there *is a lot of* ecoturism because there are *a lot of rivers*, beaches* and two mountains. The *main*activities recommended* (or "I recommend") in my country are *to* go to the beach, visit pyramids, and visit historical places and the ecoturism. I could extend me in each activity but is overmuch. Usualmente, se puede usar lo siguiente leyes... Mucho = a lot Mucho "X" = a lot of "X" Prinicipal = main Demasiado = too much, too Extenderme, aburrirme, ponerme, etc no se traduce como "extend me" "boring me" "put me", etc. Hay que traducir la "me" caso por caso. Es dificil en ingles tambien, asi que no te preocupes. Sigue practicando
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  • xxMandyxx
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    wow, good english - understandable just a few errors as commented on by the other reviewers.  but well done! xx
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