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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

aquamarine's submission: Average Rating:
Today I don't have any plans.I'm going to stay at home..watching TV,listening to music and do my homeworks.Is going to be a verry relaxing day.
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  • Luc
    Mochapoints: 10  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
    Today I don't have any plans. I'm going to stay home.. WATCH TV, LISTEN to music and do my homeworks. IT is going to be a verry relaxing day Good job. I modified the verds because you wanna use the present simple as opposed to the ING form because it expresses something you are doing all day today, not right now. good job though
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  • zizou
    Mochapoints: 3148  |  Teacher Score: 1897 (100%)
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  • zizou
    Mochapoints: 3148  |  Teacher Score: 1897 (100%)
    Oh this is remarkable ! except for the last sentence : IT is going to be a VERY relaxing day. You've done a good job. :)
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